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WEEK 2: BUSINESS WRITING
Composing, Organizing, and Editing Written Messages
An email sits in your inbox. You reread it several times. The message could have several different meanings, some of them very bad. Then again, you could be overreacting. It could be nothing. Before you know it, you’ve wasted several hours worrying about it. Worse, perhaps you’ve written a reply based on one interpretation of that message, and now, you’ve ended up in a back-and-forth exchange with a colleague who is offended that you jumped to the wrong conclusion.
There are so many ways emails – or any form of written communication – can go wrong. When they do, lost productivity, injured feelings, and damaged business relationships result. This is the opposite of effective communication and works at cross-purposes with your goals. As a leader, you cannot afford to have your messages be misinterpreted. You also cannot afford to have them ignored. So what do you do? Sir Richard Branson, the founder of Virgin Group, once said, “Clarity in business writing is not a luxury.”
Business leaders – and professionals in every business organization – do a great deal of their communication through writing. In emails, in memos, in reports and business cases, and in white papers and proposals, the written word is an integral component to all business communication. Learning how to compose, organize, and edit your written messages is a critical skill that you must develop, if you are to achieve your own goals, as well as the goals of the organization.
The Three Pillars of Effective Business Writing
In the modern, fast-paced business environment, no one has the time or patience to read long, complicated documents. Your colleagues require written communications that are clear and efficient. But even clear, concise messages can do more harm than good, if they are not also written with authenticity, positivity, and an eye toward professional presentation. The three pillars of effective business writing, therefore, are:
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The mechanics of proper writing still matter, even though modern text messaging and sloppily written conventions have seemingly become the norm. Your written communication must never undercut your credibility or your meaning. It must never distract the audience or diminish your credibility. That means writing to accepted standards of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure, as well as overall presentation.
If you keep these three basic rules in mind, your writing will get your messages heard. It will ensure that they are well received, and that they facilitate better business relationships.
The Writing Process Writing is a five-step process that begins with identifying the need to write. If there is a need, the process continues with setting your goal and strategy, formulating and presenting your message, and then editing the end result to produce an effective message. The process can be summed up as follows:
message until you can. 3. Do you know what you need to know? If you lack the information necessary to compose your
message, go and perform the necessary research before trying to write. 4. Once you know what you need to know, compose your message. 5. Edit your message, with the goal of making it more concise.
Deciding whether you should write may be as simple as asking yourself if you’re angry, upset, or otherwise emotionally alarmed. It’s never a good idea to compose a written message when you’re emotionally excited. Always wait until you’ve had a chance to calm down, so that you can write from a more objective emotional headspace. You may determine that you do not need to write at all, once that moment passes. If you do need to write, you must identify your audience.
To whom are you writing? Is the message customer-facing? Is it intended for technically skilled employees? Is it a message to management? Does it move up or down the hierarchy of the company? Different audiences require different message strategies. Next, determine what the desired outcomes of your message are. These outcomes will also dictate the strategy and structure of your message. Are you relating simple, straightforward information that is not controversial?
Are you transmitting a message that is potentially delicate and must be handled with diplomacy? Are you asking for feedback, for buy-in, or for information you don’t have? The circumstances and the audience will dictate a different strategy and structure for every message.
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Some messages require that you impart information. Others require that you have specific knowledge about specific subjects, such as a white paper or business proposal. If you do not have the information needed, you’ll need to perform the necessary research and obtain it.
In some forms of written communication, this means citing your sources to avoid plagiarism. Once you have identified that you need to write, as well as the audience, the desired outcomes, the corresponding message strategy, and the information and research requirements for that message, it is time to compose your message.
Constructing Your Message Written communications can be a quick email composed on your smartphone, or a lengthy, fully researched and referenced business proposal or white paper. The basic tenets of effective message construction – the macro of message design – start with the process we have already described. They continue with these broad guidelines:
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When you have drafted your message according to the guidelines we’ve described, you must then edit that message. Editing Your Message Once drafted, a message is not final until it has been edited. This does not mean merely reading through it to correct errors. It also means improving the message by making it shorter, more effective, and – if needed – more professional. It goes without saying that you should spell-check and grammar-check your message whenever possible.
You should also employ global find-and-replace changes to keep your message compliant with any necessary brand standards and organizational specifications. Edit your message for brevity, focus, style, and correctness. If identifying the need to write, setting your goals and strategy, composing your message, and following the three pillars of effective business writing is the macro of the writing process, then the micro of the process – the nuts and bolts of writing well – is being mindful of brevity, focus, style, and correctness.
Brevity, Focus, Style, Correctness Brevity is keeping your message short. Every message you construct should be direct, concise, and to the point. Brevity shows respect for the reader’s time. It also makes it easier for your audience to understand, process, and respond to your message. When you edit your message, always do so with an eye toward making it shorter, not longer. Individual sentences should be short, too. Separate lengthy constructions into shorter individual sentences. Focus is not letting your message get bogged down in extraneous details.
Don’t include anything that distracts from your key points or which does not support your objectives. This includes assigning blame. Blaming doesn’t support your objectives or further the purpose of your message. It also puts your audience on the defensive and, therefore, works against you when you are trying to communicate effectively. Style is the manner in which you present your message. Is the message formal? Is it informal? Or is it, as most of your communications will be, business conversational?
Writing in a business conversational style means writing clear, succinct messages that are presented with professionalism and authenticity. Very formal messages may seem pretentious and will distract or even offend the reader. Very informal messages may offend because they are inappropriate or too familiar.
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Correctness is the mechanics of writing. Proper grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation are important, even in the days of streamlined text communications and Internet-driven abbreviations. Failure to use correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure can work at cross-purposes with your objectives by undercutting your credibility. It is therefore in your best interests, when you write, to write well.
Writing Well Writing well means writing correctly. There is no single standard for writing well because what is correct changes from organization to organization. Standards differ, but there are some basic rules to follow. Correct writing:
Always cite sources that you use for references in proposals, white papers, and other lengthy communications. Brief messages, such as emails, rarely require this type of citation, but this will depend on the message itself and the context in which it is sent. Remember, just because something is on the Internet doesn’t mean that it’s free to use without attribution. Buzzwords and jargon are occupational hazards in most organizations. Avoiding these makes your writing clearer and more authentic.
This does not mean that you must never use terms that are frequently employed in your industry. If a buzzword or piece of industry jargon is the fastest and most effective way to get your meaning across, then by all means use it. Just avoid using too many of these references, which can turn your message into an indecipherable code if the recipient doesn’t know all of your terms. When being mindful of buzzwords and jargon, you must also avoid bogging down your writing in unnecessary font changes, italics, or other stylistic flourishes intended for emphasis.
This is distracting and does not actually improve the clarity or impact of your message. If your organization or industry uses a commonly accepted set of specifications or a style guide for writing, take the time to familiarize yourself with these standards. Comply with them.
This includes, where applicable, avoiding passivity, weasel words (indirect phrases like “some have said” and “studies have shown” that deflect responsibility), and exclamation points. Exclamation points are worthy of specific mention because they are almost never appropriate in business writing. They look accusing or alarming and may even appear unprofessional in tone.
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The choice not to offend has nothing to do with being politically correct. Your messages cannot reach their audience and be understood if the audience takes offense. Use gender-neutral and inclusive language where appropriate, such as they or you instead of he. Your goal is to keep the reader engaged. Offending your audience causes them to disengage. Finally, never write anything that is potentially embarrassing to you or your organization.
This includes, but is not limited to, poor grammar, sentence fragments, run-ons, and other lazy or sloppy writing that makes you look unprofessional or uneducated. It also means never writing anything in a message that you wouldn’t want to be read by every person in the company – assuming the information is not privileged. In other words, never write something that you know would be deliberately offensive.
Take the Time to Present Yourself Well Written communication can make or break a leader. Do it poorly and you risk undercutting your own credibility. Do it well and you will engage your colleagues authentically, gaining buy-in and building consensus. Using your writing in business to strengthen your relationships better positions both you and your organization to win.